Sunday, July 4, 2010

Untitled 15-12-07

Watching the tears fall one by one
Breaking into pieces as they hit the floor
How can I stop them from bleeding
Releasing all your pain and sorrow to the air
I'm suffocated by your despair
I want to walk away from you, far away
To a place where your sadness cannot touch me
Yet I stay, and every breath I take burns
As your poison seeps into my system
I can't help but take it all in
All I can do is watch you as you fall
Breaking into pieces as you hit the bottom
How can I stop you from crashing
Releasing all your hatred and anger unto me
I'm suffocated by you.

- 15/Dec/2007


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I don't really remember writing this... though I can guess under what general circumstances it was written. I actually kind of like it but I feel like it might have benefited from some actual punctuation, heh.

Also, this is the last poem for 2007. The 2008 and 2009 poems are very few in number so I should be caught up to 2010 in no time, at which point this blog will most likely come close to dying since I haven't been writing anything that good lately.

2 comments:

  1. This would've made a good Muse song, if you had a chorus for a hook ;)

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  2. Really? I find that hard to believe, lol.

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